Friday, August 31, 2018

243/365/Poetry and Form

A Gobsmacked Nonet*

today Aidan goes to college how
did this happen I remember
when her childfree parents told
us that she was coming
and I thought we’d lose
them but we gained
Aidan now
there she
goes

*Thanks, Mali. And 365ers, note that this is only one word longer than the post about Aidan from the last project.

3 comments:

  1. Oh, I love this. Thinking you'd lose the parents and gaining Aiden. (Because I've lost parent friends that way.)

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  2. Really like this topic for this form. "There she goes" quite literally goes. Sounds like there was good luck all around, since Aidan also got you and Tim!

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