Friday, August 24, 2018

236/365/Poetry and Form

(See post 235 for Part I.) 
 
2: The Review

There wasn’t enough “Winter Moon.”
There wasn’t a gin-stocked saloon.
There was too much toe-tapping
and no time for napping.
It came to an end all too soon.

4 comments:

  1. Gorgeous. Especially the last line.

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  2. Agree with Mali and Helen. Plus you gave me the gift of mentioning "Winter Moon" so I listened to it again, while reading you. Very nice way to begin a Monday, even oddly in late August.

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