Friday, August 24, 2018

236/365/Poetry and Form

(See post 235 for Part I.) 
2: The Review

There wasn’t enough “Winter Moon.”
There wasn’t a gin-stocked saloon.
There was too much toe-tapping
and no time for napping.
It came to an end all too soon.


  1. Gorgeous. Especially the last line.

  2. Agree with Mali and Helen. Plus you gave me the gift of mentioning "Winter Moon" so I listened to it again, while reading you. Very nice way to begin a Monday, even oddly in late August.