Friday, August 24, 2018

236/365/Poetry and Form

(See post 235 for Part I.) 
 
2: The Review

There wasn’t enough “Winter Moon.”
There wasn’t a gin-stocked saloon.
There was too much toe-tapping
and no time for napping.
It came to an end all too soon.

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4 comments:

  1. MaliAugust 24, 2018 at 8:22 PM

    Gorgeous. Especially the last line.

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  2. HelenAugust 25, 2018 at 2:47 PM

    See previous comment.

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  3. Kim HanniganAugust 27, 2018 at 6:06 AM

    Agree with Mali and Helen. Plus you gave me the gift of mentioning "Winter Moon" so I listened to it again, while reading you. Very nice way to begin a Monday, even oddly in late August.

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  4. CedarwaxwingAugust 28, 2018 at 11:28 PM

    And all this in Bloomington!

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